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Rainbows

The sun was a pretty girl;
Dressed in ribbons and bows.
Each day she brightened up the earth
With her crimson orange glow.

The rain was cold and bitter;
Friends with the sleet and snow.
His heart hung heavy with misery,
His songs were full of woe.

One day they collided.
The sun said “Don’t you know?
The grey and cloudy tears will soon disappear;
I think you’re great just so.”

So up in the sky together
They let their love flow.
It leapt from their hearts, across the world
And became a rainbow.
The poem I wrote that goes along with the drawing :3
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madameSassacre Featured By Owner May 6, 2015  Student General Artist
AND THUS RAINBOW BABY WAS BORN! :D
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erondagirl Featured By Owner May 31, 2015  Student Traditional Artist
Tah-dah! :D
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madameSassacre Featured By Owner May 31, 2015  Student General Artist
*le throws rainbow confetti EVERYWHAAAAR*
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BVB95 Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2013  Student Artist
This is sooo Amazing!!!!!!!!!
XD
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:iconerondagirl:
erondagirl Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
thank you :heart:
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NajinaLio Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
sooo beautiful Free Avatar Apple 
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:iconerondagirl:
erondagirl Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
:blush: thanks a bunch :heart:
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NajinaLio Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
^^
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Sabina-R Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconclapplz:
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:iconerondagirl:
erondagirl Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
:bow: :giggle:
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ChristianHedgie Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2013  Student General Artist
So sweet and touching!
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:iconerondagirl:
erondagirl Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
Thank you! :hug:
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KinimiHucashi Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2013
That drawing is cute :) And the poem is good :) Great job!
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erondagirl Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
Thanks! :hug:
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lightning231 Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Love!
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erondagirl Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
:heart: thank you!
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HappyAggro Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2013
*goes to log into deviantART*



Well, that's not a common sight! Congrats! Good drawing, cute poem, got on front page, wins all around.
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erondagirl Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
That's wicked! :D :happybounce:
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Zeldaomega14 Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Awwww cute I love it great job
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:iconerondagirl:
erondagirl Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
thank you very much! :D
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Zeldaomega14 Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Yup my pleasure
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HarleKlown Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Made my eyes tear up a little. :heart:
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:iconerondagirl:
erondagirl Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
:heart: aww bless :3
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Onikage108 Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2013

Cute.

 

For some reason, I could imagine some anime/widget series based on this poem.

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erondagirl Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
It's funny you should say that, because in my head I thought of it as an animated short. I've never done animations before so I don't know what it would come out like, but if I do get the chance it would be something I'd like to try, even if I hand-drew it all...
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Onikage108 Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2013
Works for me.
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NanaThatha Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
so beautiful
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:iconerondagirl:
erondagirl Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
thank you!
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AnyssiaAndy Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:happycry:
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erondagirl Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
Huggle! 
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yzkethrag Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Lovely drawing and lovelier poem. :3
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erondagirl Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
:blush: I feel honoured, thank you!
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SallyWally30 Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2013  Hobbyist
Brilliant <3
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erondagirl Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
thanks! :hug:
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SallyWally30 Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2013  Hobbyist
You're welcome!:)
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M-A-F Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2013
Aw, it's a really good poem and it brightened my mood up a little ^^ thank you
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:iconerondagirl:
erondagirl Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
My pleasure! Glad you're feeling happier :D
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EdgeOfDestruction Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
WOW it is amazing!
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:iconerondagirl:
erondagirl Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
:blush: thanking you very kindly!
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HHHEEEYYY Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
This is a great, creative perception of the actual creation of a rainbow.
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erondagirl Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2013  Student Traditional Artist

Yey!!! :D

There was a rainbow over my house the other day and it made me think back to this poem :D

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MiningForDegus Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2013
Great words and great rhyming. Classic.
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erondagirl Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
Thanks! I do like rhyming poems, even if that does make me seem old fashioned. When we had a poetry writing class in university I was told to stop rhyming because it's out of date, and apparently free verse is what's happening right now. I'll write free verse too, but sometimes you just need a good rhyming session! :giggle:
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snowfeatherr Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
So cute~ great job. I love it,
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erondagirl Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
:glomp:
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XKillerJoy Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
Absolutely beautiful :'3
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erondagirl Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
:hug: thank you very much!
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XKillerJoy Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
It was my pleasure, dear!~ ^^
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SherlockiansUnited10 Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Rainbow Cute Cry Plz  LOVE it!
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erondagirl Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
:happybounce:
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