The sun was a pretty girl;
Dressed in ribbons and bows.
Each day she brightened up the earth
With her crimson orange glow.
The rain was cold and bitter;
Friends with the sleet and snow.
His heart hung heavy with misery,
His songs were full of woe.
One day they collided.
The sun said “Don’t you know?
The grey and cloudy tears will soon disappear;
I think you’re great just so.”
So up in the sky together
They let their love flow.
It leapt from their hearts, across the world
And became a rainbow.
The poem I wrote that goes along with the drawing :3
This is sooo Amazing!!!!!!!!!
So sweet and touching!
That drawing is cute And the poem is good Great job!
Awwww cute I love it great job
Made my eyes tear up a little.
For some reason, I could imagine some anime/widget series based on this poem.
It's funny you should say that, because in my head I thought of it as an animated short. I've never done animations before so I don't know what it would come out like, but if I do get the chance it would be something I'd like to try, even if I hand-drew it all...
Lovely drawing and lovelier poem. :3
Aw, it's a really good poem and it brightened my mood up a little ^^ thank you
WOW it is amazing!
This is a great, creative perception of the actual creation of a rainbow.
Great words and great rhyming. Classic.
Thanks! I do like rhyming poems, even if that does make me seem old fashioned. When we had a poetry writing class in university I was told to stop rhyming because it's out of date, and apparently free verse is what's happening right now. I'll write free verse too, but sometimes you just need a good rhyming session!
So cute~ great job. I love it,
Absolutely beautiful :'3